Mosquito Horror
Ever since this human moved in, my family and I have been over the moon. In fact, yesterday, his blood pumped so fast, my proboscis hurt. Mosquitos like us were not built for this much abundance.
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There was an old book of mine where I wrote terrible stories I could not show the world. Now, with their loss, maybe they weren't so terrible after all. Behold, new ones.
Ever since this human moved in, my family and I have been over the moon. In fact, yesterday, his blood pumped so fast, my proboscis hurt. Mosquitos like us were not built for this much abundance.

Writing class homework: find bad writing in the real world and fix it. I chose McKinsey's human rights statement. It's badly written not because someone was careless, but because someone was careful.